I have a new companion in my writing room these days.
This is “Failing Sparrow,” named for the street near where artist Matt Hall found it. (He took the above photo as well; click it to go to his Tumblr.) The paper behind Failing Sparrow is a partial map of Portland; the red pin marks where Hall discovered Failing Sparrow. The apothecary jars hold some of its feathers.
Creepy? Morbid? Maybe. But I love to look at this assemblage and think about the painstaking work Hall did to reassemble and preserve it, especially when I’m trying to make a story out of thoughts that often seem as fragile and fragmentary as Failing Sparrow’s bones.
chris russo
January 17, 2013 at 2:18 pmHi there. I’m writing a comic book script, and I was wondering if there are any services or sites that provide constructive criticism. I’ve used such sites for my short stories and it has been helpful.
Sara
January 18, 2013 at 5:08 pmHi Chris — Looks like there are critique forums on Comic Fury and PencilJack. I also turned up this video of an artist doing a detailed critique of a comics script, including thumbnails, which you might also find helpful.
Chris Russo
January 19, 2013 at 3:52 amThank you!